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As push goes to pull, talking at is being replaced by listening to.
What’s needed is something to discuss.
Here is a selection of creative writing samples, written for some very big companies and some very small websites.
Poke around.
I’d appreciate the chance to hear what you have to say.

Excerpt from the Internal Document
100 new cities. The boldest vision man has ever dared. One that will trigger a competition for economic and social advantage, the likes of which the world has never seen.
Surviving much less thriving will require much more than building a wall to keep competitors out. In fact it will require building a network to let the world in.
Data is the new currency, connecting the price of entry into the global competition for information, money and resources.
New financial models are emerging to make it possible for governments and their partners in the private sector to plan and build together what neither one can build alone.
Smart connected communities are sustainable. They provide their residents with a better life… at a lower operating cost to the city… and with less impact on the environment.
Healthcare will be the best available anywhere, because it will come from everywhere. Jobs will be better paid and more secure.
And your children?
The entire world will be their classroom, and all the people in it their teachers.All this will happen because people have the foresight to build a better city… so that someday soon you will be able to live a better life.
Cisco.
Connecting the way that you work, live, play and learn.
The Cisco Smart+Connected Life Pavilion at the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai China is one of the most exciting projects that I have ever been part of.
Two things came together to make this a unique project. First, is the Shanghai 2010 World Expo itself, “the biggest show you never heard of”. From the opening May 1 through October 31st, 2010 some 70 million people will come to Shanghai to tour the Expo, which is themed Better City, Better Life.
The theme set the stage for six months of exhibits and events about the rapid urbanization of the planet. Hundreds of new cities will be built by 2050.
Which brings us Cisco Systems and their concept of the Smart+Connected Community (S+CC). S+CC is a community or city designed from the ground up to be wired. By providing a common platform to connect private, public and semi-public agencies, extraordinary things can be accomplished.
It is a fascinating subject, but one that is not easily explained to the government officials, private developers, service providers and CXOs who are being personally invited to tour the Pavilion.
ckwrites.com was commissioned to develop an internal document for everyone who would be escorting clients and prospects through the Pavilion. The document is titled The Smart+Connected Life Guide.
The Smart+Connected Life Guide took two months to research and write. Principal research included hour-long interviews with 45 Cisco employees and partners, each of whom was selected for their knowledge of a specific aspect of S+CC.
In addition, I conducted extensive online research, reviewing articles in the business press as well as websites of consulting groups, government agencies, foundations and businesses.
The project has a lot of spin-off elements. I wrote five invitations, each targeted at a different audience segment, and ten, twenty and sixty minute scripts for the Solution Center presenters, a dedicated demo space with a lot of nice touches.
The Guide also serves as the “Bible” for the multiple PR agencies supporting the project. Portions are being used for the website, and the 125 page Guide is being cut down as a gift to visitors.
I have excerpted Part 6: Showcase Cities for you to download. I have also included my original concept treatment which for me is still the most satisfying explanation of S+CC. It was later shortened for use as the pre-show video featured here.
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Excerpt from the proposal…
In many ways, the new F-150 customers we interviewed are a lot like the old. They are people who are living the new American values of a post-9/11 world. People who are proud, and proud to be self-reliant. People who care, and care for each other. People who have the courage of their convictions and the will to see things through.
They are active, involved purposeful people.
They are not easy to reach.
They decide things for themselves.
They are picky about their friends.
The F-150 succeeded because Ford let people discover, for themselves, that the truck embodied their values and met their needs. The new buyers saw the F-150 as a truck that would last a lifetime, in which they could have the time of their lives.
Their response has redefined buzz marketing and changed everyone’s ideas about pick-ups and the pick-up market. This remarkable truck restored the luster to the oval. And earned our cover for the men and women who built and marketed the “Machine of the Year.”
I was the copywriter and creative director This proposal was for an integrated marketing communication program to launch the new Ford F-150.
Since 1948 the F-Series has epitomized everything that Ford stands for. The best-selling vehicle in the US for 33 years, the F-150 is one of Ford’s crown jewels and accounts for some 50% of the company’s profits.
A bold design, the new F-150 was certain to be news in driveways and dealerships across America. Our clients at Ford wanted to give it a big time introduction – one that would ensure that the new model exceeded all previous sales records.
It was a classic David and Goliath contest, my client – an event agency – pitted against Ford’s agency, JWT.
Our solution was an integrated marketing strategy that used online activities and events to leverage Ford’s existing partnerships including NASCAR and the Susan G. Komen Foundation. In addition we used music as a hook for a grassroots local marketing program to drive dealer showroom traffic.
Our approach presaged the new understanding that advertising may be what inspires the conversati0n, but it is the combination of all the elements that yields the superior result.
To dramatize the potential of our concept, we wrapped the whole proposal up as the Time Magazine Machine Of The Year. This is one of the most interesting pieces that I have ever written. If you do new business proposals I recommend that you download it.
Written for Campos Creative Works
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Excerpt from the script…
VO: How do you define the future?
VO: What is greatness?
VO: Hard questions, with no easy answers.
VO: A few years ago, we at Boeing asked ourselves how could we build an airplane that would set new standards in comfort, performance and efficiency.
VO: After much soul searching we found our answer in a phrase that is as common sense simple, as it is organizationally complex.
VO: Working Together.
VO: Because we realized that only by working together as a team with our customers, suppliers and each other could we build a truly great airplane.
VO: Working Together.
VO: To us it means pushing the limits, setting the standard, leading the way.
VO: Working Together.
VO: Because creating the future was not something any of us could do alone. But we could do it together.
VO: Most important of all, we did.
In 1990 Boeing’s Board of Directors gave the go-ahead to develop the Boeing 777. In classic Boeing style it was a $4 billion “bet the company” move. The 777 was a twin-engine plane designed for transoceanic routes – a smart but unusual approach that would appeal to customers… but that had the potential to turn into a nightmare if Boeing was unable to secure the necessary certifications for extended overwater flights (ETOPS).
To keep things interesting, Boeing designed the entire plane using a 3D modeling program called CATIA. CATIA enabled everyone on the project to see exactly how the 3.5 million parts would fit together. With this bold stroke, Boeing eliminated the need for a full scale mock-up, minimized profit robbing rework and sped up the ETOPS certification process for their two engine design.
To make the most of the 3D tools, Boeing created integrated teams. Traditionally engineering “threw the plans over the wall” to manufacturing; now the engineer who designed the assembly, the purchasing agent who would buy it, the contractor who would deliver it and the customer maintenance representative who would maintain it all “worked together” on the design. It was a radical departure and idea that was central to the future of the company.
CEO Phil Condit knew that with the right creative approach, the event would provide a golden opportunity to move the collaborative “Working Together” model into the mainstream of Boeing culture. Under his direction, we made the 777 Roll Out into an emotional celebration of Boeing and Boeing values.
We staged the event in the 747/777 final assembly building in Everett, WA, a building that is big enough to make its own weather. We built and installed a 280′ projection surface for pani projection and 35mm film projection. We hung enough truss to light the plane with 1.5 million watts of theatrical lighting; and we installed a megawatt JBL sound system specifically designed to work in the huge space.
Show-day came early. Starting at 6 am we ran the show for 7,000 people every hour. Sixteen in all. Each ran flawlessly. The event garnered worldwide television coverage and was a fixture in the world business press for months.
Enjoy the award winning ten minute documentary video along with the video script.
Produced by Dick Clark Productions
Winner: Grand Prize, New York Film and Television Festival
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Excerpt from the proposal…
“Our goal is to place the Roadster squarely in the American landscape, to make it a recognizable pop icon; a symbol of freedom, romance and adventure. We will do this through an integrated program that exploits niche by niche the key markets for this car.
What makes the Roadster unique is that it is a BMW with all that implies: value, safety, quality and the ultimate driving experience.
This provides a solid rationale to support what at heart is an emotional purchase decision.”
BMW viewed the new product launch of the Z3 Roadster as an opportunity to experiment with non-traditional marketing techniques. In 1995 this meant anything other then mainstream advertising. Leaving no stone unturned, they solicited bids from thirty companies including advertising agencies, PR firms and event marketing companies like Dick Clark Productions.
The campaign was to be part of an integrated marketing effort that BMW was doing with MGM on the James Bond film, GoldenEye . You might remember that GoldenEye was the first time that James Bond drove anything but an Aston Martin. Adding to the interest was a new Bond, Pierce Brosnan.
The challenge was that the Bond film was set to open in November, but the car was not going to arrive at the dealers until April. Our assignment was to fill that gap and drive pre-delivery orders, after which a traditional advertising campaign would kick-in if needed.
Creative elements included everything but the Internet which at the time was not yet being utilized for much more then product brochures. That said, our strategy of “influencing the influencers” was a precursor of a now familiar social media tactic.
The creative campaign that we developed included:
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Produced by Dick Clark Productions
Winner: Super Reggie Award
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Excerpt from the treatment…
Numbers are a great visual vehicle. Every culture from the Sumerians to the Egyptians has its own way of writing numbers.
Numbers are universally understood. They are relevant to every business, to every discipline, to every field of inquiry. They are the way we describe where we have been, where we are and where we are going. You can look at individual numbers as products, and the quantities they represent as solutions.
There are simple numbers and complex numbers. Numbers that never lie, and numbers that are up. Fibonacci numbers, lucky numbers, Bernoulli numbers and round numbers.
Business Objects is the company that lets you do a number
Business Objects: Do A Number
Business Objects (now a part of SAP) began life as a French enterprise software company in 1990. They are credited with pioneering the concept of Business Intelligence, a class of software that puts a user friendly front-end on SQL databases. At the time of the proposal, Business Objects had some 35,000 customers and 3,000 channel partners.
Business Objects had issued a fairly standard RFP with a specific set of questions to be addressed. My client was one of a number of companies responding to an RFP to becone Business Objects agency, with a new business proposal.
My assignment was two-fold. First, to do market research to provide the new business team with background on the business intelligence space and Business Objects’ competition.
Second, I was asked to suggest creative concepts for the campaign theme. My client took these ideas and integrated them into their new business presentation.
Written for The George P. Johnson Company
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Excerpt from the concept presentation…
What Will Make It A Success?
- It is Targeted – to an important audience who represents one of our key growth accelerators.
- It is Relevant – to all audiences and Cisco’s key messaging.
- It creates Differentiation – through conversations about the audiences “care-abouts” and needs rather than our technology.
- It is Orchestrated – with PR, advertising and channels as well as other commercial activities.
- It is Measurable – we will know what is working and change what is not.
Cisco is constantly seeking new opportunities to fuel its growth. At the time of this proposal, Cisco was exploring ways that they could use to position themselves and their channel partners in the small and medium business market (SMB).
One of the concepts that they were interested in was partnering with American Express to sponsor events targeting the SMB market.
As their strategic event partner, my client was asked to develop this concept. This is a portion of the presentation that we made.
Chronologically the presentation was made before the advent of social media. It is noteworthy for the push-to-pull strategy which I believe will be increasingly utilized to integrate social media with traditional marketing tactics.
American Express went on to evolve this idea into their very successful OPENforum.com social media campaign.
Written for The George P. Johnson Company
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Excerpt from the proposal…
From Delhi to Dubai, Calgary to Capetown, Rejavik to Reno – wherever it is hot or cold, steep or muddy, you will find Volvo trucks providing the power to haul the load and deliver the profits.
At Volvo, Driving Success is more then just a slogan. It’s a statement about how our engineers, dealers and customers work together to create solutions to the challenges of a fast moving, fast changing world.
Whether it is by saving billions of gallons of fuel by reducing idling, reducing weight through new construction techniques, or finding ways to take advantage of alternative fuels, the world knows that Volvo, together with its dealers, customers and partners will be found at the forefront of innovation.
Showing the way.
Driving Success Together.
In 2008, my client had the opportunity to present a new business proposal to Volvo Trucks for their National Dealer Meeting.
This script sample is for the Opening Evening Gala, which was to be held outdoors on Treasure Island in San Francisco Bay.
The purpose of the meeting was to introduce the Volvo truck dealers to the new 2010 Volvo tractors. These tractors utilized unique technologies to meet demanding new EPA standards. The highly theatrical son et lumière opening was created to remind dealers of Volvo’s global leadership which set the stage for a dramatic product reveal of the new tractors.
To strengthen the relationship between Volvo and their dealers, we recommended the theme of “Driving Success Together” as a play on their tagline, “Driving Success”.
Written for Extraordinary Events
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Testimonial from the client…
As a small business owner, Chris is light years ahead of other professionals I’ve worked with- not only with his depth of knowledge, but also his breadth. He uses his abilities to extract your vision, helps to define the key concepts and acts as a catalyst to crystallize them into actionable ideas and compelling copy. He’s insanely creative, focused, and driven.
Combine the wisdom and experience of “Yoda”, with the fire in the belly of a kid out of college. That’s Chris. He receives my highest recommendation.
Chris VenHaus turned his passion into a screamingly successful small business. His brand, VH Audio is one of the most respected e-tailers in high end audio.
I got to know Chris as a customer, then began consulting with him. When the time came for Chris to launch a new line of capacitors he asked me to work with him to develop the positioning and tone for the new website, and to help ensure that it carried into his email and press communications.
I invite you to visit the site and encourage you to order the new caps if you are at all handy with a soldering iron.
In addition, you might enjoy downloading the interview I conducted with Chris for future use on one of his sites.
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Excerpt from the website…
Plasma screens are the better choice when:
You are going to use the unit in a bright room. Any screen – CRT, plasma or LCD, can be washed out by direct light. My rule of thumb is that if a CRT looks good in a particular space, a plasma will look even better.
You want the absolute best color rendition. This is especially important to movie buffs who want to be able to relish every detail revealed by the latest restoration.
You want the biggest bang for the buck. LCDs have done a lot of catching up, but plasma is still a better value for displays over 50-52 inches.
You want the fastest response time. If you are a gamer or a NASCAR fan, the plasma’s faster response time might be important to you. (Measured in milliseconds)
You need the widest possible viewing angles. Plasma looks better from the cheap seats…
Its always fun when I have a chance to do creative writing about a topic I am passionate about.
This is one of those projects. I have been a consumer electronics nut since I got my first record player. I’ve worked for both audio manufacturers and retailers. I’ve spent hundreds and hundreds of hours in recording studios. I’ve become an expert on using computers as high-end audio sources. I’ve learned soldering. I’ve gotten immersed in home theater. And I am writing about the convergence of media and networks.
When I drew the wiring harness for my latest home theater installation, I realized how much things had changed… for instance I now have a 4 port Ethernet splitter in my rack. And I use four HDMI cables where I once would have used 40 RCA and component cables to connect all of my components.
This article is about how to choose between a plasma and an LCD display. If you’re trying to decide, I suggest that you download it.
Written for ckwrites.com
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Excerpt from the website…
America Harvest is based on one simple insight.
We don’t need more food – we just need to be more efficient distributing the good food that is already being prepared every day.
Think about how much good fresh food you see being thrown away at your own school, social and business events. This is the food that we teach people to harvest and distribute to the hungry.
Before you finish your dinner tonight, Harvest teams will pick up and deliver enough food to provide 900,000 meals to hungry men, women and children around the world, at an average cost of 25 cents a meal.
Using the techniques that we pioneered, each of these 954 non-profit organizations has built sustainable partnerships with local government, individuals and businesses in their community. All but a handful of the ones that we have helped to start are still in operation today.
By thinking globally and acting locally we are able to weave legend, fabric, ethos and spirit into a lasting fabric of support for communities around the world.
In 1981, Helen verDuin Palit developed the concept of neighbors feeding neighbors while managing Yale University’s Dwight Hall Soup Kitchen. The idea of is simplicity itself. It is about harvesting (salvaging) good prepared food that would otherwise go to waste and using a fleet of trucks and trained drivers, to immediately distribute it to local shelters.
I have worked with Helen as a creative director and a copywriter for many years. I have written speeches, grant requests and marketing materials. In 2008 we decided to do a website to build on the interest created by her nomination for the 2009 World Food Prize so I wrote the web page content.
Please visit AmericaHarvest.org and make a donation to this worthy cause.
Written for ckwrites.com

Excerpt from the script…
V1 We don’t just have clients, we have friends. The Internet helps me do that. It turns a client into a friend; someone who is trustworthy and believes in you.
V2 What really helps us to get clients is the quality of our product,
V1 We use technology in our greenhouses, technology in our irrigation systems; in fact we apply technology to all aspects of our operations.
V2 One of our short-term plans is to create an Internet sales system, so that our clients have access to our cold storage stock through the Internet.
V1 The faster and more responsive you are, the more satisfied your client will be.
V3 Our customers know that Ecuadorian roses are the best in the world.
The most complex project I have ever worked on as a copywriter was a series of regional tours for Dr. Craig Barrett (CRB) when he was the CEO and later the Chairman of Intel. Every year, Craig traveled to some thirty developing nations to communicate the importance of technology (literally “why IT matters”) to the future of the people and especially the children of each country.
At many of his stops, Craig hosted sophisticated hour-long business theater presentations for leading members of the government, business and educational communities.
Each presentation was developed from scratch with the in-country Intel team. The creative assignment was identify local examples that were relevant to the audience. The shows included video case studies, on-stage software demonstrations and celebrity guests; as well as Craig’s keynote which integrated all of the elements.
In many ways Intel’s approach mirrors current social media strategies. We built a relationship with each audience by recognizing their accomplishments and inviting their leaders into a public dialogue. While the event was clearly Intel branded, it was never an Intel sales pitch.
My primary job was the development, preparation and post production of the video case studies. I would help the Creative Director to collect and assess the potential case studies nominated by the local team, do market research to prepare briefings for Craig and his team, and develop the question sets for our location video teams. When the team returned I would lead the editing effort.
For this Latin American tour the team produced 14 videos on various topics in four countries, taking them from initial concept to final approval in about five weeks.
The video script sample demonstrates how an Ecuadorian rose grower uses technology to grow better roses and to expand their international customer base.
If you register, you can follow the step-by-step development of this story through a series of work documents leading up to the final script.
Produced by Campos Creative Works
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NARRATOR:
Do you remember the future?In the future, we would compress time and space.
By miniaturizing the smallest connections between us …
we would shrink our problems …
shorten our workday …
compact our world.
MUSIC: Modem hiss, more electronic, less human
Internet protocol would replace the human kind …… as zeros and ones traveled the ether in our place.
The future would break the barriers between us.
Blurring borders …
dissolving time zones …
erasing misunderstandings.
In time, the future would make all things known …
… and all people the same.
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One of the best things about B2B copywriting is being part of a new product launch. There is nothing like the buzz, the energy, the tangible crackle, the palpable enthusiasm as a product is readied for its debut on the world stage.
In 2001, the entire aviation community knew that Airbus planning to use the Paris Air Show to present their double-decker A380.
Fierce competitors, Boeing wanted to steal some of their thunder. More importantly they wanted to shift the discussion away for the Airbus hub and spoke model, to the benefits of the point to-point strategy they were committed to.
Hot of the drawing boards came the Boeing Sonic Cruiser, a long range, high flying sci-fi speedster that exemplified the benefits of a point-to-point approach. It was a seriously futuristic looking plane. (Some of the technology later found its way to the 787 Dreamliner.)
Working with the client and our IPG sister agency McCann, our assignment was to introduce the Sonic Cruiser to the world aviation press.
The idea was to set the stage with the Opening Video; then immediately reveal an 8 foot model of the Sonic Cruiser. This script did not come easily, but it remains one of my favorites to this day.
Written for Jack Morton Worldwide
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